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| superheroesarereal 2006-06-23 ch 1,  | abuse:claps: well written...no complaints. =) There were almost no errors( if there were, I didn't catch them). This was concise and emotional; you got your point across. =) good job. |
| Anikke 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this piece. It may have been short, but it was well written. I don't, think by chance...you'd be continuing, eh? |