Great story!

I really liked this story! Great writing!!

Zomg! Why havent I read your stories before? Well, thank god I found your works.

I thought it was really cute and fluffy and cliched. But I LOVED it.

Now, I'm off to read the rest of your works.. :3

Aw! That was so sweet. I loved it!

aww this was the cutest story ever -- im still freaking cry cos its just to sweet, i loved it!
keep up the awsome work :)
xx sammy

Aw so cute!

xx

this story actually isnt as bad as i thought it would be. hope it gets better!

I started this story and the prologue was so amusing and nicely paced, that I continued. Each chapter was predictable and yet still somewhat original - which kept me reading! Ironically, the strangest part of the story is that I absolutely hated Jacob by the end. And yet I kept reading the story and liking the story itself. In other words - your writing has a strength that keeps people interested! Hehe!

Although I still don't like Jacob... sigh. But like I said - that was part of why I kept reading too. I wanted Jacob to stop descending further and further into innocently-manipulative, co-dependent, needy boyfriend land. And he kept sinking further into that quagmire.

Favorite character - Emma's sister!

It's been awhile since you put this up, but I just came across it very recently.

Anyhow, I had a constant stream of "aww" running through my mind throughout this story, and you definitely succeeded in telling the story very well!

Great job!
- Rebekah

i just read the entire thing though. And it was absolutely amazing. My heart ached at so many parts. I loved it. Jacob is adorable =)i loved it

This was really sweet
Good job
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Oh very cute. It was pretty rushed but hey, I'll admit that I kind of like that because it lessens the frustration on my end xP Regardless, you still managed to develop Emma and Jacob's characters very well and the plot was pretty good for such a short story. Awesome fluff!

Oh dear. I think my heart just fell out of my chest. Or something to that extent. That was so perfect... I'm so not a girly girl but the girly girl in me is squealing right now.

Oh figures I picked another fluffy one to read next. But oh well, I adore fluff. And this one is giving me butterflies already... I have to say that that pretty much summed up my grade nine relationship, except for the whole love bit :P

Woah he totally misread her.