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| kate 2006-06-23 ch 1, | "Our only kiss was an accident. A beautiful gasoline rainbow."The Lovely Bones.Alice Sebold |
| Fujimi 2006-06-23 ch 1, | It was dark, and I liked how it read, and the last line, “Grin in your mind,” how that ties how the person is feeling no remorse. The symbolism of leaving something—“Walk the path you came./ Never looking back”—behind was fitting, too. A good job. |