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tesa131313 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuseHad a nice rythm going.
Isabell Clarke 2006-10-21 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem! You have such a talent for poetry! Thanks! Isabell Clarke
Golden Holly 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseWow, very confusing, but nicely written.
RuleroftheSmokyTavern 2006-06-26 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is confusing and great and wonderful!
writer emo chick13 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseYou confused a simple minded freak. Good, though effing confusing.
The Breakdancing Ninja 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThe Breakdancing Ninja gives this a 3 out of 5 for clever use of grammar. the poem seems to be having an identity problem, seeing as how it has to keep convincing itself, in past, present and future tenses that it is itself and always will be. That generates the precise problem of WHY the poem was written. The strange use of "him" instead of "someone else" is peculiar. The poem has some kind of subconscious knowing that its writer has either been compared to someone else, passed up for someone else, and so on. The struggle for uniqueness in writing stems from the anxiety of an individual blending into the crowd. [Nor/ I won’t be him] *"Nor will I be him" or even a semi-colon after the line before "Nor" to keep the same "I"-scheme: [I wasn’t him/ I am not him;/I won’t be him] the poem itself is sort of quiet. I'm glad there's no melodramatic screaming caps. It's pretty graceful in its own right. You could drop by my story and send a little constructive abuse, too, if you want. Otherwise, this was perfectly fine.
IwasSmitten 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. It's so simple, but powerful. And it seems like evrybody runs around confused not knowing who they are or what they're doing here.

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