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BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 6,
abuse**! Rebecca to! And what was on that photo? aww, por girl, both Rebecca and Jenna. And just to put it in, I feel so proud! I´ve played drama sense I was 9 or something, and most people says I´m good ( I cant really know if I am good or not but hey! One can always hope ;P .
BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 5,
abuse**, and then he sheeted on her? what an **! I must say that all of the stories i reviwed you are the fatest one to answer ^_^. Anyway! I got an idea for you, Ian culd be gay and he and Ryan like helps her to get back to her real self, and like one of Ian´s old friends pops upp and ,ha! Here is the guy se have been whaiting for or something...
BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 4,
abuseU senaky bugger! Sigh. Anyway... It wuld be kinda funny if Ian was Gay, hm... I can´t decide!
BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 3,
abuseDUN DUN DUN!! Will i or will I not found out in next chapeter? I´ll just read and see...
BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 2,
abuse1) Ryan seems so funny, I always loved gay guys ( i´m a girl, so not in that way...)! 2)No! this is probably decided by kow, but hey! The question is still there. I think he shuld be the one to save her from the dark or something. 3) This is probably also decided by now, but maybe Amy?
BluePillow75
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseHm... interesting, I must say. What happend on prom hu? Must read and see...
alayahop
2007-11-07
ch 8,
abusePlease don't ditch this story
dooorkette.
2007-04-06
ch 8,
abuseyour story is kind of confusing since you switch point of views alot, but other than that i love it!update soon!
Bentastic
2007-04-06
ch 3,
abusehahahahaha my favorite chapter out of the 6. Ryan is so funny, and Ian is such a great character. Great story! keep up the amazing work!
dooorkette.
2007-04-05
ch 7,
abuseian sounds sexy, omg, what i would do to have someone like him in my life. rotflol. update soon!oh crap, its on hold, your really going to make me go insane arent you?
Bentastic
2007-04-04
ch 6,
abuseomg such a good story. I love the characters (go Ryan and Ian!!) and the plot its overall great.

i think ryan and ian should so hook up, they would make a cute couple..

great story!
Cara Deanna
2006-08-23
ch 6,
abuseomg... that basterd!... um.. it was a good chapter please update soon
ShinningStar1025
2006-08-23
ch 6, anon.
abuseI like your story can't wait to see the next chappy. Hey one question Jenna's ex boyfriend cheated on her with both her best friends right. So does anyone else from her old friends know and if they do why haven't they told her. And can you please tell us if ian is gay and how he looks like i have the picture in my head that he might be kinda punk/emo/ skater but not like overly that way no big plugs or stuff like that. But your story is really good keep updating and I'll keep reading.
kyon-kyonxkitty-chan
2006-08-23
ch 6,
abusewow update really soon I'm dying to know what happens! OMG! its so interesting and you pulled me right into the story, update soon please!
lizzy08
2006-08-23
ch 6,
abuseit really good please update
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