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| Confused Yellow Stallion 2007-11-25 ch 13,  | abuseAwe. =] That was such a cute end. Sad, but cute, me likey. Confused Yellow Stallion |
| TheGreatSorceressRheaa 2007-01-04 ch 12, | abuse~YOU CAN"T STOP IT THERE! I wanna know who she picks...*sniff*~ |
| Dancer431 2006-09-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseWell pretty good chapter, but didn' Evan already choose Jess? so if he chose Jess why would he get mad about lyle and Jesse. But good. update soon. |
| Atropa Belladonna87 2006-09-02 ch 12, | abusei know it's a bit late to start reviewing with chapter 12 but i have been really busy. i read the whole thing and i loved the part where jesse has split personality. and her relationship with jess is really special also. with all the twists and turns in this story i wouldn't be surprised if she ends with jess. dissappointed but not surprised. anyway, it's a piece of art and i'm looking forward to more. :)) |
| shanasheart 2006-09-01 ch 12, | abuseHI HI HI... so sorry i havnt reviewed in a while...i just got a new job at bath and body works and ive been working like you wouldnt believe...KEP THIS STORY GOING...please? thankes shana |
| ainedamdz 2006-09-01 ch 12, | abuseYey! ANother chapter update! **turns into cute little guardian angel, pops on Carlyle's right shoulder** "Carlyle, follow your heart... Go with Jesse! Screw the sissy dancer!" Wahahaha!! A jock w/ split personalities is a cooler boyfriend than a dancer, in my opinion! It's much more unpredictable that way!! But then, you're still the author!! UPDATE SOON and good luck. ^_^ |
| Dancer431 2006-08-21 ch 11, anon. | abuseOk kul,pretty ok chapter nothing much happens. but good. update soon. |
| ainedamdz 2006-08-07 ch 11, | abuseyey! nice chapter! twists, huh? ehe... make it good! udate soon, k? =) |
| TheGreatSorceressRheaa 2006-07-26 ch 10, | abuse*squeal* So cute! Except confusing...for the girls i mean...yeah, I'll shut up now. ^__^ The greatness keeps flowing! |
| the-griever 2006-07-26 ch 10, | abuseYour story is really amazing! It got such nice twists. I find the names cool too- Lyle and Evan especially. |
| PrettyAwkward 2006-07-23 ch 10, | abuseGood Chapters, it must of been really hard to say that in front of them both. Well update soon. |
| shanasheart 2006-07-22 ch 10, | abuseokay! this was a random chapter in my opinion...so he feels protective for Carlyle yet wants to date Jess.HM do i sense some possible twist on feelings? or is that from lack of sleep? ha. keep it up. cant wait till ya write more! shana |
| ainedamdz 2006-07-22 ch 10, | abuseUgh. I dont like the last chapter you made. >.< Carlyle's supposed to be the lead! WHy does it have to be Jess who captures the leading man's heart? *jumps up and down* And if ever it really is gonna be Carlyle-Evan in the end, its like, Carlyle just got Evan from the rebound! Waah! *bawls over computer* Me don't ever like bittersweet endings... *dries tears* Phew. I hate Evan. Stupid moron ... He's blind blind blind blind blind blind ... *sticks out tongue* ^_^Anyway, hatred's Just for the character. Not the story, my friend. Keep up the good work! |
| TheGreatSorceressRheaa 2006-07-16 ch 9, | abuseAw that's so sad. *sniffle* Poor kid. |
| shanasheart 2006-07-13 ch 9, | abuseNO! ah okay...so he does like jess. Okay...thats alright...he'll fall madly in love with Carlyle...right? RIGHT? gr arg... lol... jk...dun worry...im just a girl who wants them to get their groove on...but that would be a sucky story...yeh ha. i liked the little add in of the brother...although it was kinda random. But! keep it up!and i'll keep being the annoying reviewer...shanaps- how did evan get into dancing...cuz normally the guys i kno that dance...are a little...umm...well...they seem to act just like girls...you get the point right? okay...thanks...BYES! |