adam's absolutely adorable (yay, alliteration!). he's so infatuated and swoon-y over chase, completely oblivious to chase's own feelings. x3
this story is really cute so far. it makes me happy :D -keeps on reading-

so amazing! great story here!

Wow. I laughed, I cried, I just nearly had about every emotion with this story. See, this is why you my favorite author on this site. Your amazing!

I really have to say, for a first fic posted, you did a wonderful job =)
I love the story, the drama, and the characters.
Great work! :D

loved this ending :) purfect lol

i'm kind of glad they didn't make out at this point. since chase hasn't bathed, brushed his teeth or anything. That and he'd been sweating and wearing a fireman jacket and hat right and cooking chili. it's kinda like "ew"

**paputsza~valey**

I stopped at Chapter 19 so I think I'll pause there until you get your rewrite up...

but I wasn't arguing that it doesn't get cool in florida, I was arguing the crisp and cool... I've seen it get down in the 30s but it's still humid as all get up... I swear humidity is a constant in this state... I just want the weather to be better than it was last year when I was still wearing shorts and tank tops at Christmas... I'm holding my breath for cooler weather this year...

I'm enjoying this story so far but this line got me

It was December now, and the usual hot, humid Florida weather was beginning to turn crisp and cool

I've lived here all my life and go to UF and I don't think a day has existed where I would have ever called the weather in this state crisp and cool, especially near winter haven... ^_^ sorry had to add that in, it's one of those things I hate about florida the weather. but keep telling people it gets nice...

oh that was very depressing...

-sqeals- OMG! Love it... and this review for the last few chapters. They were great. And I'm curious as to ask but, did you have this type of experience?

ok, I found another one of your amazing stories. I like this one, it seems... more realistic. At least in the high school view of things.

God I wish I could witness that at my school! That would ahve been really funny.

Wow, sounds like a guy I know... ek! Scary!

Excellent story. I am really crappy at reading things as they come out, but I just fifnished reading this story and it's awesome. I would really like a sequel.

Absoloutly loved this story, and I'm so chuffed I can read the sequel now! This story is so going on my fave list ^^