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| Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-17 ch 34,  | abuseI really have to say, for a first fic posted, you did a wonderful job =) I love the story, the drama, and the characters. Great work! :D |
| yayawhynot89 2007-12-29 ch 34, | abuseloved this ending :) purfect lol |
| paputsza 2007-10-01 ch 14, | abusei'm kind of glad they didn't make out at this point. since chase hasn't bathed, brushed his teeth or anything. That and he'd been sweating and wearing a fireman jacket and hat right and cooking chili. it's kinda like "ew" **paputsza~valey** |
| DBZ-FAN-JESS 2007-09-30 ch 18, | abuseI stopped at Chapter 19 so I think I'll pause there until you get your rewrite up... but I wasn't arguing that it doesn't get cool in florida, I was arguing the crisp and cool... I've seen it get down in the 30s but it's still humid as all get up... I swear humidity is a constant in this state... I just want the weather to be better than it was last year when I was still wearing shorts and tank tops at Christmas... I'm holding my breath for cooler weather this year... |
| DBZ-FAN-JESS 2007-09-29 ch 19, | abuseI'm enjoying this story so far but this line got me It was December now, and the usual hot, humid Florida weather was beginning to turn crisp and cool I've lived here all my life and go to UF and I don't think a day has existed where I would have ever called the weather in this state crisp and cool, especially near winter haven... ^_^ sorry had to add that in, it's one of those things I hate about florida the weather. but keep telling people it gets nice... |
| borndifferent 2007-07-20 ch 21, | abuseoh that was very depressing... |
| borndifferent 2007-07-20 ch 18, | abuse-sqeals- OMG! Love it... and this review for the last few chapters. They were great. And I'm curious as to ask but, did you have this type of experience? |
| borndifferent 2007-07-19 ch 13, | abuseok, I found another one of your amazing stories. I like this one, it seems... more realistic. At least in the high school view of things. |
| borndifferent 2007-07-18 ch 3, | abuseGod I wish I could witness that at my school! That would ahve been really funny. |
| borndifferent 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, sounds like a guy I know... ek! Scary! |
| Uadea U Ja 2007-06-04 ch 34, | abuseExcellent story. I am really crappy at reading things as they come out, but I just fifnished reading this story and it's awesome. I would really like a sequel. |
| Back of Beyond 2007-04-09 ch 34, | abuseAbsoloutly loved this story, and I'm so chuffed I can read the sequel now! This story is so going on my fave list ^^ |
| Momoro 2007-03-25 ch 7, | abuseAhaha this story is so cute and funny. I love the super fantastic day part and the part where he faints the best. Adam's so adorably awkward. XD |
| Chasmodai Blue 2007-02-08 ch 34, | abuseI so idolize this now...it's like, my new object of worship. I review because I wanted to wish you luck your life and stuff. (Mostly because it's 12:16 on the eigth and you just edited the author's note yesterday). So...erm...good luck, and I idolize your story. |
| Someone 2006-12-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseWinter Haven, no way! Do you live there? Also I like this story so far, and how your doing both points of view, Adam and Chase's, now I'm going to continue reading. |