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| Sparrow Still Sings 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abusewhat is this? Why has no one else reviewed this beautiful piece. I envy the ability you have to rhyme."I sweat I'm strong - rouge - tumble - desperately humble." Although I'm not sure it was your intention writing this or not, but I feel alot of hope coming from this.Kinda like in the way of never regretting, never looking back. "kiss me at every stop light"the little romantic girl that is inside me just melts into a puddle of lovey dovey goo at how romantic and just so darn love sounding it is.It also holds a lot of symbolism as well - to stop on your destination for a kiss. A snatched moment for something that might not last too long but it still happened. The Heaven question has shoved a bowling ball in my heart {but in a good way}. In all honestly, that is going to be something I'm going to remember for the rest of my life. Tsk. I wish I could say something other then "I adore this, it is beautiful." - but thats really all I can say for why I like it. How its touched me. The summary for this was really an extra helpful push for understanding it. Within my own personal life, it makes me wonder how things would have turned out if I had someone there for me. Like you were there for her and stayed for someone who needed that strength. "what is worth Heaven?"it might be different for different people, but for me it is love.I believe I'd rather just be loved and have love. I would give up heaven for love. Because that is what truly is Heaven. - Sparrow {by the way, you're very welcome :) I always review whatever I read, and I'll be likely reviewing all your pieces within time. Thank you for your review as well. Did you get my review for "Emerging Green" - I reviewed however Fictionpress gave me some type of error message of some sort) |