sweet.

well done.

I like it..

I really do :)

~Nicholas.

Nicely done! Very well written!

-Sadistikal

hey hey its shrt and sweet.like it.~Liz

Beautiful, awesome work.

The first three lines are marvelous, especially how, "For another smile." works off of the first two lines. excellent work.

I like the "making plans for another smile" part the best, it's gorgeous. Great poem, keep it up! :D

hmm... interesting ending i guess... all in all i thought this one was good

i really like this poem.seeing as i love music and that i think it can solve anything i can sort of relate to it. Good job.kate

Deep. Kinda haunting. Nice work.

Quaint. Minor grammar/spelling issues, but that's okay. It's sweet. Nice job.

Great poem. I love the 2nd & 3rd lines. On a side note, it should be "While you're making plans," not "While your making plans."Keep writing.

Sweet I like it.

aw...that is really sweet...and thanks for the comment!

*shivers* Haunting, a bit.