Reviews for Nocte Yin: How To Be Evil 101

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Lord Cirenmas 2008-04-17 ch 13,	Still awesome! I really liked seeing Nocte show her power. It makes me wonder if she is going to make more use of it more visibly in the future. Of course I can probably find my answer by continuing to read. So I think I will stop typing and read on. Great Story!!
Seraphic Deviltry 2007-07-12 ch 13,	NYGHT!! Hyperventilating! It's so exciting! Will she be EVIL will she be GOOD? The first story of Nocte Yin was so good I was afraid that the sequel would pale in comparison, alas it did not. It surpassed my expectations and all that jazz... Anyway I loved it! I am so reading the next one, cha. -Seraphic Deviltry
FreedomStar 2007-04-19 ch 13,	Ah, so that's why the first letter of each chapter was bold. I was wondering if that was just a weird quirk you had when you wrote this last year. So, it's now 3 a.m. and I have finally read all three of your stories. If you're wondering why I'm reviewing this story last, instead of 'Confessions' it's because I read part 3, and then one and two. So yeah...I really really really enjoyed the story. Lots of characters in it. Awesome! Oh yes, and one more thing.. 'I-live-to-be-evil!'
Michelle Habibi 2007-03-19 ch 13,	this chapter made my eyes fill up with tears. its kind of unbelievable but for some reason, i felt the same way as Nocte when everyone betrayed her. i think its because of your superb writing skills that just makes you feel like you're actually in the story. congratulations, not many writers can do that! wow, im kind of sad that its over, well, there's always the 3rd installment but i've already read that. i read that first, and was kind of confused about everyhting that happened until i found out by going on your profile that there were prequels. so it makes sense now that i know what happened before the 3rd story. the bad thing about it though, is that now i have to wait for updates instead of clicking the convenient link on the right...sigh i guess im just going to have to read it all over again until the next chapter...not that it wouldnt be fun, of course! lol, hope to see you soon in the next update in the 3rd story SOON! -Michelle
girlsbyte 2007-01-30 ch 1,	So, I'm sitting here in the school computer lab, on sperhero day, surrounded by capes, underwear on the outside (partialy my fault I admit) and steriotypical, famous, and all too obvious heros. Unfortunately from them a few villians (or semi-villians or me) decided that a school full of heroes needed a few villians thrown in. I (devious, anoying, and wanting to see if I was the only insane one here) came as Nocte Yin the psuedo villian/hero. And was recognized as her. And raved about your story with likesix other people. ^^ And had my costume changed and I stole Captin Caveman's (coincidentally by boyfriend's) cape. Life is Good. (And I haven't reviewed your story in ages. sorry bout that)
Mistress DragonFlame 2006-10-01 ch 13,	It took me a bit, but I finally finished the back stories of the one I started a day or two ago. Very interesting, and I enjoyed the length. there were some flaws here and there, like inconsistancy with the previous mention (Nocte went to the antique store for Dire's birthday, not Christmas, for instance) and a few misspellings, or errors in the words (Rone when you just mean one, and the like). My most hated chapter, sadly, appears to be number 14 of the first story (14's usually the best, too...) mainly because it's in script format. Blach! A pain to read much? I could only pray that it didn't continue. My favorite had to have been her birthday gifts chapter (forgotten which it was), mainly because of the Hellhounds. I'm so sad that she ended up getting rid of them!! It would have been cool for her to have three Hellhounds trailing her around, making Noirs uneasy. Also, you had Elsu lead up to something in this story, when he suddenly attacked Deadwood, but it never showed any. Also, I would have assumed Nocte would have asked Yone to tell her what happened, as he saw it. Another small problem was with the 1337 5p34k. I can understand leet very well, but a few words in here even tripped me up. Well, that's about it. From reading (ie, skimming) your few author's notes, I see you don't really have a set character yet, but I think she's very well involved. Nothing she does seems 'off' as you put it. Well... maybe when she nearly suffocates from being outside. That was mentioned only a few times, and other times it is show she enjoys being outside. Like when she was at the beach, and when she was staring up into the snow. Well, that's all for now. Till the next time you up-date. Bye!
Kkat84 2006-09-19 ch 13,	Good job-or should I say evil job? ;) The message was very amusing. I'm looking forward to the next story. If you get the chance, check my story out.
twilight-eclipse 2006-09-19 ch 13,	Nocte Yin and Nocte Yin: How To Be Evil 101 is just so amazing, I'm so nearly speechless. something that doesn't happen often at all. I waited every week for each chapter, dreaming of what could happen next. Now I have to wait Hell knows how long for Nocte Yin: Confessions Of A Villian-In-The-Making. The story just gets better and better and so much better. I really just can't wait. Please update soon! ^^
Basilisk-zero 2006-09-18 ch 13,	That was great, can't wait for Confessions.
Me 2006-09-17 ch 13,	I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY like this! In fact, I love it! You should become an author!
polofreak1689 2006-09-17 ch 13,	I LOVE this story! I can't ait for the next one to come out! Please write more soon!
WindWarrior 2006-09-17 ch 13,	Nocte.is.awesome. pure awesomeness. this must be one of the first times I've ever wanted the main character to be evil. Nocte is being a good girl being evil. haha stupid pun. sorry for not reviewing in so loong. apologizes ferventlyI went on vacation and when school started I was really caught up in the drama and trying to stay on top because homework assignments and other extracurricular dates and events etc. were building. I am definitely going to reread those awesome parts with nocte in them. a hell dragon...nice nice AWESOME touch. and I will most definitely read confessions of a villain in the making. ... ...THREE WEEKS INTO THE SUMMER?! THREE WEEKS?! incoherent gibberish da! glares death glares no sorry I take back the death glare. I most definitely want you alive you wonderful, person, writer, whose evil at the same time!
doc-peppper 2006-09-17 ch 13,	Great ending! I think the ending message was very fitting so she's going to be evil then? I love how she's getting stronger through the story. Like at the beinging she didnt really stick up for herself and now she's making the princess of the vampire's run away with her tail between her legs (not literally though) So is there going to be some romance in the next installment? not that there as to be because I love it just the way it is but, well I was just wondering... anyway I cant wait for the next one to start, I never want it to end. Your such a good writer!
Aneedegorarose 2006-09-16 ch 13,	=D Awesome I think the little message thing is really cute and fitting lol (Well it wouldn't not be fitting because then it'll just be weird and random) But wow I enjoyed this one alot, more serious than the last one and characters are amazing. All the readers of this are just slaves, because I can never wait for the next bit and I would do anything to read it! I never want the Nocte Series to end (But it must one time - hopefully a long long long long way off). Plus I like your rant site.
Nara Merald 2006-09-16 ch 13,	I live to be evil... nice. What can I say? Poor Nocte. Will she go and spend some time with Aman? If i were her i wouldn't be able to stand her family right now! I wouldn't even look at them! I can't believe it... please start the new story soon! i'll be reading...as always :D

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