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| atreyu love 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abusehaha. sounds really cute :) |
| MostWantedDesire 2007-08-30 ch 9, | abusehey, i like your story. you shoulld keep working on it. its getting good. good luck and keep posting. |
| Angelical12345 2007-05-13 ch 9, | abusei like this... please continue. |
| Kriti 2007-03-28 ch 9, anon. | abusegod im falling in love with Eli!n now m also begining to think Java is the 1 who needs an attitude adjustment...i dont know how u do it...coz my opinion was the opposite i the beggining of the fic!pl.pl. update soon...n im soo so loving kate n matt...cant wait for that as well!! |
| quesogrl 2007-03-11 ch 9, | abuseHey I really like this story! I think you should continue it because it's one of the better plot lines you have. It's really original and deals with some deep crap. I've never read anything like it, and trust me, I've read a lot of online stories! lol So anyway, yeah. Just some friendly encouragement. |
| gabriellafaith 2007-02-12 ch 9, | abuseOh my gosh... I don't even know what to say. This is so sad. Oh bt it's so amazing too! It's a really good story...update soon. |
| PenChewer 2007-01-07 ch 9, | abuseAwe loved the chapter poor Sierra her life is crap, and i could really picture the car ride home with Eli and such, it was very realistic, i like how you made her like hysterical, it really added texture to the story, i loved the chap. can't wait for an update glad your feelin better //Jess |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-01-07 ch 9, | abusewow. you actually managed to get a reaction out of me. trust me, i'm one tough girl to crack but my eyes were actually stinging and thats the biggest compliment that i could ever give you so well done:D it was really, really good! keep it up and update soon! |
| Cannon 2007-01-06 ch 9, | abuse:( Poor Sierra. I can and can't see why Java hates Eli. *sighs* Ah well. I hope Sierra gets away from her parents. Nice chap. Very emotional. |
| Cannon 2007-01-01 ch 8, | abuseI LOVE this story. o.o *adds to favs* |
| Zephyr-wings 2006-12-10 ch 8, | abuseMan you took your time updating! (that sounded too unappreciative and demanding, let's try something else). Yey you Updated! (yep, that sounded more grateful). Can't wait to know what Eli is busy with, so update soon please! :P |
| PenChewer 2006-12-09 ch 8, | abuseHeyy love the story glad you updated plz update soon!! //Me. |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2006-12-09 ch 8, | abusewow its been AGES since you've updated this! but wow a lot happened!! hopefully Sierra didn't do anything to herself...:( k update both stories soon:D |
| Stephanie 2006-08-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseInteresting chapter. I am sorry I have not been reviewing much- I spent the summer at the University of Pennsylvania and was rather busy... Anyhow, I enjoyed this chapter and liked seeing Eli being himself around Java's friend. That was interesting. Please continue. Have you read Christie Golden's novel On Fire's Wings? Your last sentence reminded me of that book. I think you would enjoy it. |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-08-22 ch 7, | abusephew thank godi hate guys who sleep aroundbut of course he's probably done it before |