really cool i like it

You're a lovely poetess :)

If that wasn't a word before, it is now.

good poem i couldn't write like this when i was 13 keep writing :]

Kinda neat, but sad. A few grammatical errors. . . like the last line- it should be "too," not "to." Great potential, though, and really heartfelt. Nice.

ir's "Unfaithfull" with an artists twist

thts so nice

i thought this was ok. not one of my favorites but good none the less. keep writing