Another really good poem with a nice message. Well done.

I loved all of this poem to death. But I'll pick out one specific part to talk about. I'd have to say that I absolutely loved the lines

"She didn’t want the curtain pulled back, she was—happy—in the dark.

Sunlight b u r n s, after all.)"

It was another one of those lines that just sends chills running up and down my spine. It was almost ironic... how sunshine is supposed to make things better, but that it can burn if you don't want it. Whatever I'm saying, I LOVED this poem.

Wonderful as usual! Well written and very hard and emotional at the same time. It was like forcing you to feel her pain and telling you everything you're feeling is nothing special all at the same time. Well done.

I really liked the part about not wanting the curtain pulled back because I have felt that way before and understand so well what you were getting at.

Love your poetry! Keep writing!

~Krys

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i love you.

NO.

i!

love!

you!

This poem went through an entire 5 hour bar drinking binge in 30 seconds. What a mindrush that one was...you really captured the effects of alchohol on the thoughts pretty well I'd say

the old mantra: WRITE MORE GODDAMNIT!

this was great. i love the drinking theme 'life's little i n s e c u r i t i e s' i like that. & the last line 'sympathy went missing' and 'denial is o-so sweet' so true. 'nothing will ever change' that hit me. 'she wishes that she could be/drop-dead drunk/all the time' i can really relate to that line. . .great job with this.

Ah, I loved everything about this.