Fairly entertaining. Humorous. I very much like this.

Painful, but a good read.

I love the interaction with the little gypsy girl.

This one has some very interesting bits to it.

I find this entire thing almost pointless to read because I know that it'll peak my interest and all I will end up doing is torturing myself by not knowing what the end result will be. You are a major tease for doing this.

Wow. I really liked this story. No, I haven't read your other chapters yet because my head really really hurts, but I read this one for now. (Others later when my head isn't splitting open.) I think you should try to work it as a story. Figure out what genre, what the characters are there for, etc, and you'll have an awesome story as per usual. Of course, you don't need me to tell you that. I just thought I'd let you know that this story has potential. Or maybe I just really like the feel of the time period you're putting out.

A nice amusement. Very entertaining, really. Ryen was quite an intertaining character to read.