The rhyming is a forced pretty much throughout, but the ending makes me smile. So, work on flow, I guess. There's got to be a way to get the point across and still have a good rhythm to the words.

True, true!
I love this poem!! And the rhymes are just great!

hahaha...that was great. Seriously. So true.

I like this! It's so much fun! I like to consider myself an artist, and I've been to a lot of art galleries. They can be very confusing! Excellent work, but there's just one line that bothers me: 'I couldn’t figure out the meaning of this art was.' It's a very awkward line. Try something like: I couldn't fathom what the point of this art was. Or something. You're the poet, but this line just jars the flow of the poem.
Nice work, very enjoyable.

this was really cute. my only criticism would be that the rhyming began to feel forced in certain parts like you were trying too hard. but, it was very cute, made me smile.

i liked this, escpecially the ending. keep writing.

Humorous, and the ending is cute. I think in these two lines you meant to add the word "what" between "out" and "the": "Okay, so I don't know art, so sue me because / I couldn't figure out (what) the meaning of this art was." The rhyme seems a bit forced, but I like actually the spacing (even though this website messed with it :-)). Keep writing.

hahahahahaha...that's great! nice twist at the end. all your rhymes seem to work well. this poem echoes the plight of many...including me. nice work! keep writing.

-xalter_egox-

P.S. thanks for the review on Shapes of Clouds!

A nice poem, which I have enjoyed reading. I normally don't enjoy modern art much, so I understand what you're getting at. Well done!

Oh God, modern art kicks the mental crap out of me. I like the way you describe the art as "weird blobs of clay". :P Thanks for expressing the views of the un"philosophical" so bluntly and perfectly.~V

love it! I get that feeling too, sometimes. even poetry can get wacked out and wild. there was really good flow and rhythm through out the piece, and your rhyming didn't sound forced, except in two places.

I couldn't figure out what exactly you were saying in the line "I couldn't figure out the meaning of this art was." and the was at the end seemed a little awkward, and then the line "After this I'm ditching art for theater no less." the no less didn't seem to fit, like it was added on or something.

But altogether I loved it. Very fresh, and it vents your frustration with humor.

Very clever!

...Roars with laughter...I enjoyed it muchly. It had a great flow too. Awesome write! Keep'em coming.

very interesting and different. thanks for sharing.

I think this poem is very instresting! You did the ryming perfectly! Thank you so much for the nice review! I'm not just saying nice things because you said nice things about my poem. I'm serious this poem is a true piece of Art! :)