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Reverend-Boone-33
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseHey Rach! I joined this just so I can comment on your stuff. Man this poem is stinkin awesom! I hope you don't mind that I use this with SAT because by the time you get this, I will be in school already saying it and showing it to people.O well, you know I love ya.-Daniel P.aka: Rev Boone
D. A. Emme
2006-08-01
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing! I liked how you wrote this. It's true though, if we weren't sinners, Jesus wouldn't of had to die, and we'd already be able to live for Eternity.

Anyways, nicely writen keep writing!
special
2006-07-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful poem.

I Loved the message you got across.

Very touching.

Reminds me of how much Jesus Loves me, and how much I turn away.

Praise God that He always forgives, and always Loves.

Praise God that He washed my sins away.

Praise God for authors like you.

"But now having been set free from sin, and having become slaves of God, you have your fruit to holiness, and the end, everlasting life." Romans 6:22. Romans is an amazing book. Read up!

Lovely poem. God bless!

;)allie
His Mercy's Waiting
2006-06-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's powerful...and so true. Keep writing, your poems are great.
Christina Miller not signed...
2006-06-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseIgnore that Confucius wannabe below me. You have hit the nail upon the head. This is very true and well-done.
Joseph Mises
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseJesus had but one true message...and you are far from it...

Excellant poem though, and strong message. I feel it.

Sin. What is sin?

There is no good. There is no bad. There is only human.

Veritas Vos Liberitad
Freed by Mercy
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseWhat a powerful realization. We can only be eternaly grateful for His great gift.
Just A Note In The Wind
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really well done piece. The drama of the situation is used well in order to make the idea of His forgiveness so strong. Great job, and keep it up!
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