this was amazing. you always out do yourself. it was so sad. so much emotion. just...wow. amazing.

Mr.Magic

'Jesus and a pint of beer'...yay! i like!

oh, and so did cari. but then again she saw that it rymed and was satisfied, so.

cari: 'yay!'

At the beginning, it reminded me of something my friend went through with his father getting drunk, but that's about as far as I got with similarities in my life and in the poem.

Excellent. I love the imagery that you used, and you really did an amazing job with putting the proper emotions in this.

Wow...this was an excellent story. I really loved the imagery here. Erie and haunting.

This was a great poem, Apoc, as usual.

Keep it up!

~Krys