This has a marvelous fragmented imagery going for it. The personification works well, and the whole work rushes well. Great work.

nice, dude. this is well done, and better then i could do. let me see here... an E by any other name/ would be a sideways M... Nah, i'd never make it.

Live forever, or die trying!!

Hi, just returing the reviewing favor! I like this, though I'm not really sure what it's about. It sound goods though, and I enjoyed reading it!

Somewhat surrealist, and definitely a good read. I love the last bit about the horses- reminded me fo something, I don't know.

Great job.