|Reviews for Ranch Story|
| diwu6398 10/10/10 . chapter 1
Hello. Thank you for subscribing, I guess. I just gave this a sort of quicker than normal read (sorry, I'm really busy right now; I'm trying to get information for a poster I need to make by Thursday) so this is going to be a quicker than normal review.
I'm not really sure what I thought about this story. I felt like it had too much dialogue and not enough description and stuff. But apart from that, I felt like this story could go somewhere good. Um... the characters were pretty well developed. ARGH I FORGOT WHAT I WANTED TO SAY! Okay, I'll just stop there.
| Subbie 12/10/08 . chapter 1
hmm. Sounds interesting. Maybe more details about his before-relationship? But great job anyways and I hope you update soon!
And in his and Dan's relationship, was Dan abusive, or...?
Anyways, can't wait for more.