i find the last line a bit funny. "I’m tired of forgiving because that’s my simple way" is my favorite line though because i can relate SOO SOO much to it. thanks for reviewing my poetry. i appreciate it. i was actually having some doubts about "I Stand Neutral".i see this poem a tiny bit similar to that poem.

I like this poem. It reminds me of my ex best friend. Keep up the good work, I've read some of your other poems, and I like them.