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Reviews For: Smile, my baby girl
frogs of war 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
So sad.

You seamlessly brought us through the flashback and I didn't realize she was a ghost (spirit) until the end.
castelgard 2006-06-24 . chapter 1
youareagreatwriter!!i love how everything revolved around the smile of the old man.. everything!!
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