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Reviews For: In the face of death

Amalia Jagd
2006-06-24
ch 1,
"Guns are useless/Knives don’t hurt/Tell me please/Does death hurt?" those are good lines - you build up to the worst of possibilities... then you end it with a question... and im thinking it's rhetorical. and plus you ended the whole thing well! good poem you have here!
EyesAreTheWindowsToTheSoul
2006-06-24
ch 1,
B-E-A-UTIFUL! i love its so pretty & dark but i think dark is pretty! love how its written...
verifyme
2006-06-24
ch 1,
The rhyming at the end was great. Nicely written!
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