Such a nice story :D I really hope you can update soon.. I like the way you're writing it.. No need for improvement there ;)

I've been meaning to read one of your stories for awhile and I love this! Normally, I have so much trouble keeping Japanese names straight, but I can tell them all apart, especially Kaoru (whom I love.) Please update soon. :3

I love Kaoru and Takashi!! Please update soon. I can't believe you left us with this cliffhanger. :)

i love this so much. i think both men have wonderful interaction with each other and karou sounds so sexy! awesome job. KEEP GOING PLEASE!! i need to know what happens! :) ttyl

OMG! This is so good! Update please. I can't wait to see what happens.

YEAR LONG WAIT!! What?! Don't you dare do that to me. I want more really badly. Please. (I'm on my knees) Please. (I'm getting my pants dirty) Please.

Ouch, I'm feeling really sad for Takashi, That cold shoulder was icy.

HOLY EFFING A I HAVE TO GO BELL RUNG BUT I'M IN LOVE

woohoo! another chapter! I almost died when I saw the notification in my inbox. Looking forward to the next one!

right. Now I have read it all. I hope Kaoru-kun slaps Takashi-san!! I loved the lyrics and your discription. ^^ waiting for the next chapter

I was going to wait until after I read the rest of the chapters to review but... BY GOD TAKASHI-SAN IS SUCH A BASTARD! Okay, on with the rest of the story...

Wonderful! This is the first thing I've read from the managa section ^^ Your story and characters are so good, you did a wonderful job. Are you Japanese?

Wo...I just read this on a whim, and my word, I am impressed! The change the boys went through is astonishing, and your writing is so empathic and real. I was gripped until the end of your latest chapter. You've made the boys so believeable...I love the idea of turning timid Kaoru into a VK god and toning down Takashi's extravagance...it made me a little sad when I read what he could have been at the start of Shattered. I love the girls, too - you write them so energetically!

All your charries are so believable and I can picture them so easily in my head...mind if I try a fanart of them when I next get free time?

Keep it up, I love this! =D

Great story, hope you start updating more often! xD

This is my first time reading this story and I must say that I am enjoying it so far. I can see why it has so many wonderful reviews. It's also nice to meet another author who likes to write shounen-ai.

You think eleven pages are long? Lol, my usual number of pages in MS Word average on 15-20 for most of my stories.

I'll definitely be back to give you another review.

If you wish, feel free to check out some of my works. You may like them.