Reviews for A F T E R T H O U G H T

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livworld 2008-07-04 ch 7,	abuseOMG! This is so good! Update please. I can't wait to see what happens.
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-05-02 ch 7,	abuseYEAR LONG WAIT!! What?! Don't you dare do that to me. I want more really badly. Please. (I'm on my knees) Please. (I'm getting my pants dirty) Please.
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-05-02 ch 5,	abuseOuch, I'm feeling really sad for Takashi, That cold shoulder was icy.
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-05-01 ch 3,	abuseHOLY EFFING A I HAVE TO GO BELL RUNG BUT I'M IN LOVE
navi 2008-02-24 ch 7, anon.	abusewoohoo! another chapter! I almost died when I saw the notification in my inbox. Looking forward to the next one!
sakiikumi 2008-02-22 ch 7,	abuseright. Now I have read it all. I hope Kaoru-kun slaps Takashi-san!! I loved the lyrics and your discription. ^^ waiting for the next chapter
sakiikumi 2008-02-22 ch 2,	abuseI was going to wait until after I read the rest of the chapters to review but... BY GOD TAKASHI-SAN IS SUCH A BASTARD! Okay, on with the rest of the story...
HGiel 2008-02-10 ch 7,	abuseWonderful! This is the first thing I've read from the managa section ^^ Your story and characters are so good, you did a wonderful job. Are you Japanese?
Chibineko-chan 2008-02-06 ch 7, anon.	abuseWo...I just read this on a whim, and my word, I am impressed! The change the boys went through is astonishing, and your writing is so empathic and real. I was gripped until the end of your latest chapter. You've made the boys so believeable...I love the idea of turning timid Kaoru into a VK god and toning down Takashi's extravagance...it made me a little sad when I read what he could have been at the start of Shattered. I love the girls, too - you write them so energetically! All your charries are so believable and I can picture them so easily in my head...mind if I try a fanart of them when I next get free time? Keep it up, I love this! =D
Back of Beyond 2008-02-05 ch 7,	abuseGreat story, hope you start updating more often! xD
Melissa Norvell 2008-02-05 ch 7,	abuseThis is my first time reading this story and I must say that I am enjoying it so far. I can see why it has so many wonderful reviews. It's also nice to meet another author who likes to write shounen-ai. You think eleven pages are long? Lol, my usual number of pages in MS Word average on 15-20 for most of my stories. I'll definitely be back to give you another review. If you wish, feel free to check out some of my works. You may like them.
Bitter.Sweet.Endings 2007-06-28 ch 6,	abuseaw, it's cute. I like it! it's nice- well-spaced out, if you know what i mean. Nothing happens too quickly; that's a big pet peeve of mine. loves it
Error-Author 2007-04-17 ch 6,	abuseAw, poor Takashi-san! One mistake in the past and he's paying for it pretty hardcore in the future. Hee, I like Aiko and her group! Poor very certainly not homosexual Takashi; drafted into their group of doom! Where can I sign up for the group of doom? Life sounds so much better out there sigh Hmm, I noticed the odd spelling mistake, but I forgot to write them down right away and now have no clue where they are. Ah heh, sorry ish guilty Oo, and your very first paragraph, the intro to the story in the prologue, I just found it a wee bit hard to comprehend. It's not like there's anything wrong with it, just that you skip from sort of present terms to memory in-the-past phrases like "back then" and "at that moment". It just left me a little confused while reading it, trying to decide whether it was a memory or a present action. I obviously got it later, but I dunno, it was the only thing I could find to suggest a correction, hee. Great job! I noticed your last update was last year, are you still going to continue this? You've really set it all up well. I love the situations your main characters are in and how their lives are so different from past to present. I hope you decide to update soon!
Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-03-06 ch 6,	abuseaw! its so sweet! i love it so much. if i had money, i wood totally pay you to continue! but i dont . . . . so cood u possibly just continue anyway? please please please please! ill give u an online hug and cookie?
dolly-dear 2007-01-15 ch 6,	abuseMore, please?

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