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| What's it matter? 2007-04-19 ch 1,  | This is really well done. Kinda morbid but in a totally awesome way. But it's like it's not finished. You need to like, add another chapter or something. |
| MC25 2006-09-27 ch 1,  | uhh... it was okay. it could have been a little longer. it feels like there is something missing from the story. work on that would ya? |
| spacehikariangel 2006-06-24 ch 1, | very appropriate title. it was twisted and morbid, but it kept me interested so good job. |