Very well written, I love the emotion in this. Well done! :)

I am in love with the imagry in this piece. wow, very real. keep it up.

Wow I can really feel the emotion, I mean wow. It was nice I really enjoyed it. Kind makes me take a look around. Keep up the good work

-Boe

Yup, I know what THAT feels like. I like this poem Pammy, you have done an awesome job expressing yourself, you are one heck of a writer!

Luv

Hidden Lies

i LOVE the last line! awesome! i like the WHOLE thing- priceless-Liz

not the sort of poem I usually read, but I found that I did like it. it's simple, to the point, and very expressive. nice writing.

I like this - I don't know what to say about it...but I like it - does that count?

I LOVE IT

Hey. I know whatchu feel, dude. This is an awesome piece. I like the way your write. (

I can absolutely relate to this..it reminded me so much of last year...it was all lies for the majoirty of the year..and no truth..it sucked.

Neways, Pammy..i no wot ur going through...and it is really hard..but i dont no exactly how ur feeling so i cant offer the best advice...i just hope that ul be ok and ul get through it..friends are hard 2 come by, so easy to lose and so hard to get back; its almost cruel? Dont you think?

I loved this..hell, i love all ur stuff..u are a fabulous writer_ Hope 2 hear from you very soon *hugs x3*

spirit-of-the-flames-

friends, friends

cliques are cliques, no matter how we deny itfunny no?

oh boy, i sense a lot of angst in this. i think you are a very talented writer.

Of course another wicked (i was about to say sawicked? wtheck...) sweet poem. I can't say I can relate to this one though, I just think it was (duh) well written :o) keep it up huns!

Good write. The formating in particular was very expressive.

Two words- Freakin Awesome! I love it! It's despairing and real without morphing into depressing and cynical. It's perfect. Bravo!

Smooches-Wizzy