Yay for Takashi! I really am not liking Miroku right now. I happen to like Ben a lot better...but I'm also in love with My Toaster Thinks I'm Crazy, so that may just have something do do with it xD Yayz. Look forward to readin next chapter!!

I skipped all the chapters up to 44 and all I can say is keep writing so I could at least know what you are trying to write for an ending...I love fictions that are 44 chaps or more...so yea

Wow, that was like, the perfect way to end this chapter.
Miroki's words were like... so wrong. It's like, dude, don't you have any compassion left in you? Seriously. That was wrong.
Wow, okay xD I'm just in shock.
Takashi shoulda kicked him in the balls for good measure. He totally should.
Great chapter

** YEAH TAKASHI! Bout time you grew some balls and laid one out on Miroki!

This was great, I'm glad to see Takashi getting a spine again! Maybe Miroki will realize his complete idiocy!

omg... will like... this be like a kinda sequal for the real story of ben merc and romeo? thats... kinda mixed feelings... cuz like... i just read the sequal without the ending of the 1st story so it sucks... BUT ITS STILL AWESOME! CUZ ITS LIKE... the sequal... and it rox... PLZ UPDATE SOON!! heheh i LOVE tourturing charachters... hehe its always amusing! makes for a better story the more they are in pain i say! well... as long as they dont die and stuff... hehe that sucks... well.. only if they have 2... CANT WAIT! i liked Miroki but now i wanna see him crawling on the floor begging Takashi to take him back and Takashi should be all like... NO I LIKE BEN NOW! MUAHHAHAHAHA or Yasu wutever hehe! and rain or whoever is like... nice but not nice... idk... i dont like her... UPDATE SOON!!

OMG ITS BENVILIO! OMG AND MERC AND ROMEO AND VAL OMG! I MEMBER THEM omg... wow... why did he go to japan? TIS IS AWESOME I LOVES BEN! hehehe

I want Yasu and Takashi to get togerther... Yasu is the best, he rocks!

Ahaha! It's amazing that Yasu has a Twitter. If I had a Twitter I would totally follow him.

I'm definitely going to review everytime you update, whether you've become a review ** or not. I just really like this story. It makes me laugh, it gives me little pangs of sorrow, and it gives me hope. I think it's amazing.

Heheheheh. Foreshadowing.

And yes, it is a sickness.

So Rain and Sleazeball got an apartment? **.

YOu keep teasing us with not showing the first encounter between Miroki and Takashi. I'm absolutely LOVING Takashi right now, and Miroki, he's nothing but a cold-hearted, callous coward who doesn't deserve happiness with anyone. Only with Takashi of course, but that's only when Takashi makes him feel the same pain that he went through!

Excellent work!

Another chapter WOOT! *happy dance*
I must admit, I was a huge Takashi/Miroki fan, but ever since Yasu has come into the picture I really think Miroki needs to die for all the pain he's put Takashi through. Seriously, if Takashi went back to him, argh! Miroki would end up doing the same thing again and again and poor Takashi would have to put up with it...*protective hug of Takashi* At least with Yasu he has a future. ... .. Plus I really love the way you write Yasu ^^
Waiting eagerly (like a puppy ^^) for more chapters.
Much

Oh boy, where to start? I really love this story, to be honest. At first I started reading this just to relieve some stress, but the more I read, the more intrigued and interested I became.
I really like the stark contrast of tone between the very beginning and these last several chapters, it's very passionate.

One of my favorite lines comes from chapter 31, if I may quote: "No one else can know the extent to which I am tainted, the depths to which the filth fills me. Behind my ear. It will be perfect. No one will ever see, my hair will cover it. It will be a secret, just for me."
The rhyme at the end positively sent shivers down my spine. And I'm not ashamed to say I teared up a bit at Takashi's brooding.

Keep doing what you do; it's amazing. Much love!

I'm going to review you every time you update because you're amazing.

I loved this update. It was interesting to read it from Yasu's point of view, and you got to learn some cool facts about him. The whole thing was so bittersweet thought. Aww. I want to hug the little bugger with his talking objects.

Congrats. ^_^

Oh, Ben. You've wandered off because I've neglecting you, huh? Lol, I love how you've used him in your story and how it foreshadows badness in mine. Save for the Japan part. That's just silly :D

Love it!

Yay! More chapters ^^ (I thought I reviewed the last chapter, but I must have clicked the x instead. So I'll make sure to review doubly~)
I don't know where to stand with the whole who should Takashi end up with, but with all the ** Miroki did...I probably wont be voting for him >.>
Yay Yasu...or Benvolio, one or the other, he is still awesome ^^
Can't wait for more