Wow, that's really cool. I like the creepy, indefinite ending

I like it. The cliffhanger ending is great... it'll keep me wondering. I can't find any errors. Thanks for reviewing The Catalyst for me!

Okay, I'm impressed. I really, really like the idea, and you developed it perfectly. The song lyrics weren't exactly fitted to the theme, but I could see where you were going with them. My favorite part was the ending, however - I assume it is the ending, since you said it was a one-shot fic. Makes you wonder...

Excellent - keep writing.

Well, damn. I hope that isn't the end, because it's a cliff hanger. I'm glad to see that writing crazy stuff isn't all you can do. I can just imagine this.Please, please, please write something more.(momentary lapse, but heartfelt)Kolostramin