oh wow...this is extremely interesting! update!

I have found this story incredibly compelling, and I hope you decide to continue soon.

You write the characters beautifully, and the first person omniscient works wonderfully.

I look forward to reading a new chapter soon.

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Ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ew...I could keep going...but, just, ew...

Poor Aaron...*shudders*

now I need to know what happens next though...I vote for a knife to Flynn's...you-know-what...

I can't remember if I was even reading this story, but... Wow. This Flynn guy's creepy. o_o;

good writing, very creepy plot!

If this story could be more beautifully written, it would be pure heaven on paper. Well, it would be on a webpage, but same difference. Your writing style is enthralling. I just happened to be checking out others in the horror genre and I must say your work is exemplary. I'm looking forward to the rest!

Whoa...this is amazing! I LOVE how you've written it...the first person omnipresent view...very nice! And not confusing at all! I can't wait for an update! Bravo!

Very intense, very rythmitic. Crazy people choking fighting for possesion on one woman who is seen as a prized object, killing each other. Who would'nt like this phsycotic turmoil?

Keep it up yo!

Wow, so dramatic! Darn cliff hangers! I want more...

I hope I didn't already leave a review! Anyway, I love this story and I can't wait for more. I'm really rooting for the main character, even though he's obviously insane. I hope Hazel gets what's coming to her, but I hope the new boyfriend gets it more. (Haha, I'm such a pervert. ')

o.o Wow. This was... Wonderful. Amazing. Awesome. Write more. Write more son. Please?

The only question I have is... Is soughted a real word? o_O;

hey...i like your group's stories, i don't think i could do that and it sounds like fun. Um, this story is so..different. I like it, keep going. I don't like Hazel. lol. I like the name though, that's my fav kind of nuts to eat w/ chocolate. hehe!