I like the way what's wrong with her wasn't just explained in the first chapter. Hints are more interesting than just being told. It sounds pretty permanent though. Poor girl. The guy with the nose ring seems like he's gonna be the love interest.

oh this is gettin interesting! i wonder why he's like always staring at her and going to see her even in the dark? is he like a stalker?? but yeah i think its really good so far!! so keep on writing and do tell what she doesn't want to talk about cause i'd like to know what happened to her! thanx :D

...nevermind?! are you kidding me?! you cna't do that.

i'll be back.

OOhh, this has my attention. What's up these kids in dark clothes, and how did Jenna hurt herself? I hope you update soon!