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dimethylmercury
2006-11-10
ch 1,
haha..Thi was cute. The 'arrows' were a good idea!(:
Sweet Persephone
2006-10-11
ch 1,
I loved it!
helpless-pretender
2006-09-12
ch 1,
Awh I like it alot. I can't really relate, but yet I can, cuz like i just can. lol...so yeah. good write, keep writing. thanks for the review!
DansMandy
2006-09-12
ch 1,
I really like this poem too. It's really good, and it just made me wanna read more. The only problem I had with it was the ending. It sounded awkword. But other than that, it was really good!
CrazyTurtles
2006-09-12
ch 1,
Really good, easy to relate to. Your a good writer. Keep it up.
DemonicDestiny
2006-09-12
ch 1,
I like this. It's interesting how I've thought of this before. It's like, dang it Cupid, for once just get it effin right.lol.
Spellbound Mist
2006-09-05
ch 1,
good good good! :)
Aluminum Tinkerbell
2006-07-28
ch 1,
Haha! I love it! ^^ Very good.

"Can’t you try to aim?"

I'm going to put it up in my favorite stories. Just so you know.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
2006-07-07
ch 1,
omg...i can so relate to this! I loved it, and i dont think it needs 2 be changed one single bit, it was near perfect this way^_^ You are an awsum writer!
Bonfire Of The Sanities
2006-07-07
ch 1,
I really like the line at the end of the first stanza...the idea o being shot in the back works on many levels here...very nice
Aslan Israel
2006-06-29
ch 1,
ha. so cute, but kinda sad. nice job.
Kimiko's Cousin
2006-06-28
ch 1,
Ooh, very nice. I especially like the: Cupid’s missed again/But he won’t take the blame./Next time you get out your bow and arrow/Can’t you try to aim?

*faves*
Thy Be Chickadee
2006-06-26
ch 1,
Love it. Very well written. And I can deffinetally relate. -sigh-

Thanks for the review!
lightmasterofchaos
2006-06-26
ch 1,
You're right..Cupid does keep missing. He should learn to aim at the right people at the right time.
Lilac Ebony
2006-06-26
ch 1,
It is very well written. And i can relate some what to this poem, that is why i really like it a lot. My Cupid hasn't miss totally but he didn't get a bull's eye either.(sigh)
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