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| dimethylmercury 2006-11-10 ch 1, | haha..Thi was cute. The 'arrows' were a good idea!(: |
| Sweet Persephone 2006-10-11 ch 1, | I loved it! |
| helpless-pretender 2006-09-12 ch 1, | Awh I like it alot. I can't really relate, but yet I can, cuz like i just can. lol...so yeah. good write, keep writing. thanks for the review! |
| DansMandy 2006-09-12 ch 1, | I really like this poem too. It's really good, and it just made me wanna read more. The only problem I had with it was the ending. It sounded awkword. But other than that, it was really good! |
| CrazyTurtles 2006-09-12 ch 1, | Really good, easy to relate to. Your a good writer. Keep it up. |
| DemonicDestiny 2006-09-12 ch 1, | I like this. It's interesting how I've thought of this before. It's like, dang it Cupid, for once just get it effin right.lol. |
| Spellbound Mist 2006-09-05 ch 1, | good good good! :) |
| Aluminum Tinkerbell 2006-07-28 ch 1, | Haha! I love it! ^^ Very good. "Can’t you try to aim?" I'm going to put it up in my favorite stories. Just so you know. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-07-07 ch 1, | omg...i can so relate to this! I loved it, and i dont think it needs 2 be changed one single bit, it was near perfect this way^_^ You are an awsum writer! |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-07-07 ch 1, | I really like the line at the end of the first stanza...the idea o being shot in the back works on many levels here...very nice |
| Aslan Israel 2006-06-29 ch 1, | ha. so cute, but kinda sad. nice job. |
| Kimiko's Cousin 2006-06-28 ch 1, | Ooh, very nice. I especially like the: Cupid’s missed again/But he won’t take the blame./Next time you get out your bow and arrow/Can’t you try to aim? *faves* |
| Thy Be Chickadee 2006-06-26 ch 1, | Love it. Very well written. And I can deffinetally relate. -sigh- Thanks for the review! |
| lightmasterofchaos 2006-06-26 ch 1, | You're right..Cupid does keep missing. He should learn to aim at the right people at the right time. |
| Lilac Ebony 2006-06-26 ch 1, | It is very well written. And i can relate some what to this poem, that is why i really like it a lot. My Cupid hasn't miss totally but he didn't get a bull's eye either.(sigh) |