Cool poem! I liked it! I like how you just left a cliffhanger. Leaving the reader guessing.

"Two beasts hiss at me,

I hiss back and they run."

I like that part the best...but I think it's just because I have two cats :) It made me think of them. This is another good one!

hmm... i like it... very good...

this is very very good. i relate to it way too much.

nice work! excellent job

o0o0 another like-able one!

"Then"...what? You made a cliffhanger so now you need a part 2 to this! Don't leave me hanging! :)

Interesting..this ought to continue cause it is well written and im interested. let me know if you add more

I hope this continues...because I thought it was very interesting. Good work!