The specifics in this work well. They make the entire work relatable while still delving into abstracts like,"sins", "guilt", and "dreams", The final two lines really make the work come to a marvelous conclusion, as the sound and meaning form into wonderful phrasework. Great write.

There's something delicious about the phrase "dressed in ceremonial ruin". Read it three times, it was just too good. :) `~bella~`