 Elyssa Morales 2009-02-12 . chapter 8Wow, Nick can be pretty deep, and Chris really needs to grow up. Regardless, I really like this story. Keep updating! |
 pockets are my friends 2009-02-10 . chapter 8Cute story, kind of sad, though. |
 secretslinger 2009-02-07 . chapter 8I really enjoyed this chapter and i can't wait to read what happens next to chris...i also hope that nick will get her to see that she does have a love life and that it could be a god thing. |
 AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-02-06 . chapter 8This is a really great story so far. I like it and Chris's personality is hilarious. What he said was kinda mean though. You sort of left off with suspense soo update soon plz =)!!
-kay gee |
 Stahlut 2009-02-06 . chapter 8I love this story, please update soon. |
 Julia Nathan 2009-02-06 . chapter 8NO! You can't end it there! I need more like NOW!! OMG!! How can she be so so so STUPID??!?!?!?!?!?!! UGH! Why ugh god I nedd more now! PLZ! :( |
 Izzey 2009-02-06 . chapter 8wow. he was right, but it was also harsh. but then again, reality IS harsh. but anyways, another marvelous chapter. please update again asap! |
 sofiya05 2009-02-06 . chapter 8Hey,
I like! I like! Lol, thought I'd try caveman speak there. So Chris has finally met her match I see. I do think Nick was a bit harsh though, I know he was a bit ** but she's only trying to help.
Anyways, Update soon!
Sofi :) |
 claireponcherrii 2009-02-06 . chapter 5ily |
 Maggie Dweller 2009-02-06 . chapter 8Dum dum dum... |
 I'm the Evil Twin 2009-02-06 . chapter 8Aw...that was sexy. please don't abandon it in the corner though |
 FamousOneLiners 2008-11-18 . chapter 7 i am so so so happy i found this story again, this chapter was great! |
 Izzey 2008-11-17 . chapter 7she is so clueless. lol. she can't see what's right in front of her. i guess she will in time. lol. awesome story so far. please update again soon |
 Maggie Dweller 2008-07-24 . chapter 6Hahahahaha! Oh, man! I love this story you've got going here!
Very unique plot line (at least, I've never heard it before), and Chris' personality really pulled me in. Nick seems like the perfect guy for Little Chrissy-in-denial. Lol.
One thing though, sometimes when the characters should probably be talking in a semi-formal way, you've put them into full out long grammar. Is it just the characters way of talking? Because from their actions, it doesn't seem like it would be...
For example!
[“I am sorry that tonight did not work out. I will see you later.”] I think it would sound better if Nick said it like, "I'm sorry that tonight didn't work out. I'll see you later." It seems to fit his more laid back style with a less formal tone.
Anyway! Great story, and I hope you update again soon! :) |
 Holiday in Spain 2008-07-15 . chapter 6I LOVE it. It's so awesome and there are some serious funny moments. But it's good that... in one of the chapter, I don't remember which one, that you got an insider look as to how Chris works and why she does what she does. Good job. ^^ |