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| writing.life.2.4 2007-11-07 ch 1,   | its good! theres a few typos (like u say hurray instead of hurry and u call millie abigal) but besides that really cool and interesting. the robert thing seems like it'll be a really good/cool plotish thing for the story! hope u update soon! |
| rebelforever 2006-08-17 ch 1, | I liked the beginning of your story. I hope you update soon. |
| Kirei na bara 2006-07-29 ch 1, | that was a very cute fiction... I'm kinda glad it was the first one I ever read!Update soon, please! |
| just me 2006-06-26 ch 1, | ARGH! This is really well written AND interesting, two things i like in a story. So update soon please! Thanks for the first chapter! |