Robert and dinah are related! It fits! Cuz her mother left her with her aunt when she was 5 or 6 and Robert is now 6. So her mother had him when she left Dinah alone! Good story!

Totally AWESOME!
I really want to read the next chapter now!

its good! theres a few typos (like u say hurray instead of hurry and u call millie abigal) but besides that really cool and interesting. the robert thing seems like it'll be a really good/cool plotish thing for the story! hope u update soon!

I liked the beginning of your story. I hope you update soon.

that was a very cute fiction... I'm kinda glad it was the first one I ever read!Update soon, please!

ARGH! This is really well written AND interesting, two things i like in a story. So update soon please! Thanks for the first chapter!