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Reviews For: Never Forever, Very Bad Day
Dragonzz 2006-06-26 . chapter 1
Wow. This is so relatable. This poem is EXACTLY what i'm going through right now. I love it. It gets the emotion out perfectly, and the last two lines are an awesome way to end.

~dragonzz~
Beautifula 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
Wow, athdt would be very hard to go through... Stay strong and cry all you like! You wrote it out really well though.
ravishingdarkness01 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
I think this one is the best you've written yet. I hate him, i hope his night is filled with terrible dreams!*smiles* I don't want you to feel pathetic, C. he should be the one feeling pathetic. Everyone should read this poem,

Terribly sad buddy, Kres
Leon. 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
I loved it.. your best work ever im sry this happened to you
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