dragon, i'd like to use this in a "what's really going on" newsletter i'm involved with.

if that's okay with you, please let me know. if you want, i could send you a copy of the latest issue before you decide.

thanks for considering it, whatever your decision!

Oh excellent. Great job:) I wouldn't worry about the false rhyme. The words you chose are perfect and that's more important (at least in my opinion) than perfect rhyming.:)

love,Sirius