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Reviews For: Fire Starter
Rinichka 2006-06-27 . chapter 1
It was a bit choppy, and you changed tenses, but I otherwise a very fond of it.
nectar in a sieve 2006-06-26 . chapter 1
Very rad :)I think you did a good job of capturing it.
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