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| fgee 2008-05-12 ch 18, | abusewow...just wow... this is really one of the best stories iv read on this website and trust me that is saying alot, it kept me compleatly captivated for the 5 hours it took me to read this i dont think i moved from the computer at all. i dont normaly review stories but i think this one definately deserved it since you odviously put alot of thought into wrighting it. i really do hope you continue wrighting this since i think that it is a real masterpiece. ~fgee |
| rAiNfAlL 2008-04-27 ch 23, anon. | abusehi.. i've been reading your story and it's quite hm.. awesome.. but i do hope you can update faster. please? i like your fic.. ^^ |
| Spazy 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story! Absolutely the best original fanfic I've read in a long time! But, no offense, are you are ever going to update again? |
| Andrea 2008-03-30 ch 23, anon. | abusewhen are you going to update again? imiss reading this. :( |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-03-19 ch 23, | abuseWhy must love be so complicated. le sigh XD Great story! |
| terry 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI also forgot to mention earlier - I hope Andrea finds out about Victoria and Melanie soon (hopefully Victoria tells her?). I just feel bad for her considering she's like Victoria's best friend and so many other people know (traci, scarlett, michelle), and she still doesn't know why victoria kinda stopped hanging out with her for a while |
| terry 2008-02-25 ch 23, anon. | abuseThis is an AMAZING story and you're an AMAZING writer. I just read the whole 23 chapters in like, 2 days - I couldn't tear myself away from the computer. I really hope you update soon |
| Omok 2008-01-30 ch 20, | abuse*laughs* =3 hello! i'm your newest loyal reader! *giggles* I hope you update soon, because I can't wait to see the Drama unfold =) |
| ColdCoffeeEyes25 2008-01-25 ch 23, | abuseJust went from beginning to end in one fell swoop! Gorgeous, just gorgeous. |
| it's not your fault 2008-01-20 ch 23, | abusei'm a little late with this review - oh well. but, **. ***, i love this story. of my favorite stories, this is, by far, my MOST favorite of them all. my absolite favorite. i love this. i wish this was finished, published, in stores, just so i can buy a copy or two and read it every day, everywhere. i love this. |
| worstwriteronfic 2007-12-23 ch 23, | abuseNice, an update! Please update sooner. I love this chapter(23)... Its nice Victoria has forgiven her... |
| TemptationWaits 2007-12-10 ch 23, | abuseOh my, narcisse, you just made my night (again) with this update. Now I must do my fangirl comments ;D Caham YEY! *cheers* Victoria is growing up and on her on. You see... she's usually seem dependant on the people around her to many things (including being cheery, or so it seems) and that included Scarlett with advices for, sometimes, simple things about relationships and co-dependant relationships. To be able to say those things to Melanie, to put her foot down and stand on her own, it wasn't JUST a big step, but brave as hell. Not everyone can face the person they love and do that. I know I said this before a couple many times, but... I'm a fan and I love the way you work your characters ^^ please continue to write, I'll always check them. And hopefully I'm not the only one who will feel bad for Michelle if she have her heart broken. She's nice and she did her part to help Victoria realizing so many things. Go Michelle, gogo! /o/ Ok, now is the typo part of this review. I don't adventure myself watching for grammar problems 'cause English is not my mother language BUT I found a little typo at the end of the chapter: (after Melanie asker something...) "Melanie demanded, and although I felt a little confused at myself as well I thought that what I was saying was beinning to make sense to me." *points at "beinning"* It's just an G missing, but I thought you would like to know ^^ Thanks for this chapter. It's good to read something and care for the main character. Nice work! |
| vfx 2007-12-09 ch 23, | abuseYes, there's a God! You finally updated! But, in all seriousness, that was a great chapter. I didn't expected any of that to happen. And I think Michelle can't be anything special to Victoria, she could maybe be some kind of fling while her and Melanie aren't a couple. But, I feel that Melanie and Victoria are a more suitable couple. Your grammar was pretty good for someone who's computer crashed and you had to rewrite this chapter 3 times. Hopefully, that won't happen again and you can get the next chapter updated more quickly. Deuces, vfx |
| EndlesslySheSaid 2007-12-09 ch 23, | abuseWow.. I'm SOO glad you updated! Especially because this update is awesome. It's really good! I'm glad that you didn't leave Melanie out of this chapter, because for a second I was afraid you would. However, I'm sad that Victoria still doesn't know what she wants, although it is quite understandable. Awh.. I love Melanie, she's awesome. Anyway, really good job and I hope everything will start going better for you from now on! ~Lotte |
| mythic-lionheart 2007-12-09 ch 23, | abuseYay, glad to see you update this. Great update. I kind of like Michelle, lol, so I am eager to see where her and Victoria go (if anywhere). Anyway, doing great. Keep up the great work :) |