I have been reading this story for a while now, slowly making my way through it chapter at a time, and now that I have finally caught up to all that is currently posted, I thought that it would only be polite for me to review.

This is a very sensitive story, it deals a lot more with emotions than several other stories I have read here.

When I first started reading this, I found Victoria almost frustrating to read about. She was such a "girl". I personally have never been girly, and have never touched makeup in my life. I don't care about clothes, as long as I'm comfortable. So to read about someone who relied so heavily on those sorts of things, was extremely different for me. Although, since then, I have started realising that despite how girly she is, she is still a brilliant character to read about. Seeing things through her point of view is always a nice break from reality. Or, my reality anyway.

On from that, I think this story is brilliantly put together. The way that you write doesn't rush into things, but it doesn't drag things out either. So it is always fun to read a little more of this story.

I hope that there will be more up soon.

gahh, i saw it coming. everything was soo perfect though! nd now we have michelle and tracie in to ruin em. you should pair up michelle nd tracie. haha, thx for the update

GRAH! I knew it! That bitch ( sorry can't help myself D: )Michelle's going to ruin their relationship! I hope I'm not speaking too soon. D: And what's with Melanie? D: Why is she constantly acting..umm, weird? I mean with Tracie and stuff? I think its time to call Scarlett for emergency help. XD AHH! Noes for alternative pairing! grr! I'm still rooting for VxM :D GREAT GREAT UPDATE by the way. ;) Definitely kept me hanging around for more. Update soon ne? *hugs j00* :3

I knew it! I knew Michelle was going to do that. Actually I don't mind that much, because it'll create conflict and make the story more interesting. By the way, I really love this story. It's different than a lot of the other femslash I've read. Keep up the good work.

hey Siana here...

as always well written n enjoyable :)

the whole Tracie and Melanie thing anoies tha shit out of me :/...i think its bc i fel like ive relived that several times with several ex g/fs...

n the intensity of Michelle and Vic...to die for...ill be waiting!

its very very good. is this story gonna be innocent, or like, explicit? just wondering

i'm gonna go study for history now. but i'll definitely come back to this later.

taking practically ever super advanced course available?

it's "every" not "ever."

and also, high school is ALWAYS two semisters, not trimesters.

Oh, she cheated, not looking to good right now. The chapter was good though. Update soon.

That was a great chapter. I knew something was going to happen between Michelle and Victoria. Melanie is going to be pissed and I'm going to love every minute of it. update soon!

I loved this chapter, it was very well written.

I'm with paledaisy78 on the whole Michelle part.

1. I definitely don't like her.

2. I wonder if Victoria will have a relapse. Especially since that chance is big enough already with simply her life being great. I mean, you never really end up being 'cured', do you? And now with all the pressure of cheating (I think it's cheating) on Melanie (who will probably freak out when she hears)... difficult decision for you to make, I'm sure!

Another wonderful chapter.

Lotte

Great chapter. I knew something was up with that michelle. Bet she liked the kiss too...well, it seems like it.

I kinda miss the sweetness between melanie and victoria... I hope she comes back soon.

wow, it has gotten really interesting now! You're doing a great job with this, keep it up!

I can't wait to read what happens next!

i have to sleep now, but this chapter was as usual, astonishing. but ya. i'll finish rading tomorrow. woot!

Eventually I found sitting on Dylan’s lap and singing the star spangled banner.

bad grammar. shouldn't it be "i was found sitting..."

anyways, other than that, it was great as usual. i'll go back to reading now.