hm, this chapter seems different from all your other chapters (why is this chapter different from all other chapters? In all other chapters you _ and in this chapter you _) heheh, sorry, I was making a Jewish-joke relating it to the four questions... don't worry, I'm Jewish so I'm allowed to make Jewish jokes.

But, this chapter seems like a summary, rather than part of a story. It seems obvious that you're trying to end it. That's ok, but it makes me sad.

I'm also worried about Vic because she's becoming one of those people who drops her own life and becomes a part of her girlfriends life. That usually ends badly because when/if they break up, Vic won't have any friends or a life to fall back on.

I love those snippets of conversation between Mel and Vic, like about Romeo and Juliet and shoes. Mel is actually a really cool person.

This thing with her mom is so weird. She should be happy she didn't get kicked out or anything. I mean, i understand why she doesn't want to give up her independance, but she's not even trying to meet halfway

Well, this chapter ended well, but i still worry about Vic and Mel. I can't wait for the next chapter! *grins*

I'd waited so long for this chapter! I love it!

Please write again soon

This is well written, I'm glad. A lot of good stories are kind of wasted when they just don't make sense because of how they're written. Keep it up!

My bad, I totally bypassed the chapter list, I'll get back to you.

So, where does the romance come in? I'm liking it so far.

I like how the relationship between Melanie and Victoria is progressing, it really does seem like she's becoming dependent of her. But still, I'm finding it a little hard to believe that everyone who finds out about her relationship is so accepting of it. I mean is she really that lucky? Ah well, still loving the story, waiting to see what her father is going to think of torie and melanie...

This story has come such a long way. It started out quite excellent, but in recent chapters I've seen the small flaws that were there smooth away wonderfully. The writing as a whole flows much better than it did in the beginning, and I'm impressed that it's not only the plot and characters that have developed beautifully. The mother-daughter 'I like girls' revelation is well-handled, well-said. I love how you describe Victoria's relationship with her mother. And with Melanie. It's thrilling to see the too getting closer, and affecting each other so much, though it's sad that they've begun to neglect their other friends. Great chapter.

Awe this is a great chapter ; itz so sweet and nice. Plz update s00n ;D

ah, update! finally, just the other day i was wondering when you were going to post something again.

well i'm glad they got telling at least one set of their parents out of the way, even if it wasn't planned. but it all turned out for the best, so no harm done.

i'm also glad victoria is starting eat more, i was really getting worried about what might happen to her if she kept up with her anorexic ways. but thankfully melanie has helped her with that.

i liked this chapter, it was worth the wait. still, i can't wait for the next one!

glad to see you update. It's still going good! Keep up the great work :)

haha, i love how the ads at the bottom of the page are all about weight loss strategies... oh well, great update, as usual. can't wait for the next one! soonish? please? _;

Kaia

I loved this chapter. I think it may be my most favorite so far. I hope you upfate soon. I would to see what you've got next.

i really, really like this story. i sat at the computer all day because i couldn't tear my eyes away form it. i hope you update soon.

...very cute...you've improved a lot from the first few chapters, I think...or, at least, I think your most recent chapters are wonderful. Yeah, I think that's my cue to shut up before I put my foot in my mouth...

WoW..i just read all of the chapters and wow! i wuv ur story *; Hope u update s00n! ;D