I'm so excited for them. I know there will be lots of love on this trip. Maybe a little too much. Hint.

I can understand why Melanie got a little hurt. I don't think either of them are ready for this. They should have just waited. It would have been better for them.

Aww, they are so cute together! I am very happy for them. I can't believe that are finally together.

Thanks for letting the readers know you're rewritting the story and that's why it's been so long since you posted a chapter. I like the way this story is written, but if you don't like it than you should change it. But I would love it if you kept the original up even when you start posting the new one.

YES! I"M HAPPY FOR THEM! SO MUCH! I"M PROUD OF THEM!

I can't believe Melanie said that!

I'm so proud of you Victoria.

FINALLY THEY KISS! It took them long enough. I think Victoria will now start to question her sexuality and Melanie will regret kissing her because she will feel like she messed up. Just a guess. I will continue to read.

That is crazy. I can't believe that Victoria thought a DRUG wasn't ADDICTIVE. What the fuck?

Aww! They are so cute together. Victoria should just admit that she's bi-curious.

Damn! Is Victoria that stupid to not see it? Melanie is starting to fall for her, that's why she is opening up. Jeez!

Oh yay! I can't wait for your update then...

I waited to long.

i say leave it up, especially when you start to post the rewrite. give people something to compare the rewrite to the original, let us have something we can look back on and see the change, the difference.

this was a great story and the lack of an ending doesn't lessen that fact in any way.

Please, leave the original version up. XD and wow, its truly amazing that you decided to keep going. it's a fairly good story. one of the FIRST stories ever, i've ever read, on FP. P I'd really appreciate it if you left it up and well, let it be a sheer memory, let it be a piece of our lives, let it be a part of our memory; or just let it be a way where some of us, burned time. )

its always nice just to leave it up here. so please, just leave it. ) xD

as for would i forgive you about the wait? well, surely i would; as long as you decide to keep going with the story; let it be a rewrite or even a complete new story with merely the same chars. XD me no care. Long as you KEEP writing. XD and don't end this story suddenly.

Aww! I'm so proud of her. Do people know about Melanie being the way she is?