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| Sparrow Still Sings 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow.I really liked this. I liked it so much I'm just a little stunned at what I could possibly say. Just the story of it, they way it was woven and explained was very touching."leading lady""supporting actor" -"she knows what she didshe knows why she did itshe loves him enough to do thisbut not enough to make him happy"- that has got to be my favorite part of the entire poem.The ending really packed a punch into it as well. You really have an excellent way with words and set the entire thing up perfectly. This is going on my favorite's list - and I'm off now to go read some more of your work. - Sparrow |