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| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseI like this story so far can you please continue and update your story. |
| Gawain 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseUgh. *shudder* Sick. The interesting, horrifyingly facinating kind of sick. Actually, it reminds me of a real-life story. The Werewolf of Hancock, I think it was. A man and his partner, an retired male prostitute, would lure attractive homless men off the street with food and such, then the guy would drug them, kill them by chewing their throats out, butcher them, throw the bones into a river, and sell the meat on the black market. >> |
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. While some people are asking for an update, I don't think it needs one. The way it ends is a powerful punchlineand speaks for itself. Very good execution, although I've gotta say that I feel more sorry for the girl than the blond twink who'll be served up after the appetizer. |
| NSMounts 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseDelicious story. It made me crave some grilled long pig. |
| blood-stained-linen 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseawesome. write more of it, i definitely want more. |
| Disgusting 2006-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHIS IS REPULSIVE |
| Not Login At The Moment 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was kinda weird |
| RAVEN-6666 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat lead on, and awesome ending. Where's the next chapter though...I need to know what happens... :) |
| Aries is the god of wotever 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abusehey where is that second chapter anyway?? That was awesome, you should publish this... though lots of people would call you sick and so on and so forth. I love it keep it up. |
| SpongeMonkey 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat do you mean you're not that good?? This story is awesome! I really hope you plan to write more. My own imagination is not sufficient. |
| Oscar-Wildess 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHaha, pure awesomeness! I love the characters and the way they are written. Good work, pleas update. |
| Cheeseraptor5 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI am amazed at your ability to warp the human state of fear into something so poetic and engaging. This is wonderfully, delightfully disturbing; I love it! |