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| awannabewriter 2006-07-26 ch 1,   | something else that needs to be submitted to a contest, magazine or something. GREAT one!! |
| KingdomRain 2006-06-26 ch 1, | it was good, but when you first start off its third person (i think) and then by the end it changed to fist person... thats the only problem i have with it... other than that i liked it. very well writen and i liked the ending. keep writing. |
| admiresher 2006-06-26 ch 1, | very nice. great poem. keep it up. =) |
| Ellin Louise 2006-06-26 ch 1, | A good poem... I don't think the explanation of the change of 'me' and 'her' is really needed, but it's good anyway. |