one word, cute. ... no adorable. I love these two. They're just ... perfect, I suppose, for how different they are.

OMG I am so sad I didn't find this until now. Act I was like the best ** story ever and I read it ages and ages ago, but I never bothered to check for a sequel. Only, now that I have, I am so happy and my heart is full of fluff and wonderment. Go you. This kicks the butt off of everyone else ever. Great job :D

At first I wasn't sure about the non-chronological order, but I actually really like that you ended where you did. Especially since I spent the first three thinking "Eddie's calmed down an awful lot," and this pulled the characterization back into focus. Also helps it end on a less...grim...note. My major gripe with this one is that the "starving lovers" gig is a bit unbelievable, given what we learn about Max's family later. I've done the Ivy League schtick, and really rich kids don't fall between the cracks, especially when they've got sympathetic, wildly wealthy parents like Max's. I had to teach my sophomore year roommate how to turn on a vacuum cleaner, and the same summer I was working at a grocery store because there are no other jobs in this economy she was a personal assistant to the Hilton executives, not because her parents have anything to do with the Hilton family, but because families with money have connections, and money makes opportunities. I don't believe Max's family wouldn't have a connection somewhere, especially in NYC. It's sort of romantic in that 'through thick and thin' way, but it just makes the situation feel somewhat manufactured. Anyway that's just a chip on my shoulder; otherwise I'm really glad you wrote this, because it's easy to forget that the really difficult part of a relationship isn't getting together, as hilarious as you made it here, it's staying together, and you've balanced conflict with sweetness perfectly. I look forward to reading more from you! :)

I love Max and Eddie, but I'm a little confused. In Chapter 3 Max and and Eddie had graduated and moved to New York, but in Chapter 4 Max's father asked Eddie what he was majoring in. Is the time-line just not important in the sequel, was this a slip up, was this on purpose?

Wonderfully and sinfully sweet. I love these two together. They never fail to break my heart and glue it all back together whenever I see them being romantic together. I love the sap, I love the fluff, I love everything about them. Just, oh my God. This is great. So great.

in the end love is all that matters

you just made me the horniest person on the planet... I'm going to go jerk off..

aw, this sequel made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I don't often enjoy sequels because more often than not, they water down and weaken the prequel before it but this one was well, just a little extra bonus to a great story in the first place. I really have fallen for Max and Eddie.

I LOVR EDDY AND MAX! THEY ARE TOO CUTE!

so freakin awesome! i luv it!

egads i love your stories - pls update?

Wow--fantastic. I was confused at first between the switching from the recent past, to the present situations, but I got it covered now. I just hope that something better comes along for both of your characters' situations while they survive in New York.

That was one sexy, VERY HOT chapter...*drools* Have more confidence in your writing, you're good!

I am glad to see a continuation. Great work! I like to see the little ups and downs and twists and turns...very interesting sweet story.

No more Max and Eddie. And I only discovered them this morning. Oh well, a sweet way to send them off!