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| CharismaticOutCry 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseBravo! Loved it! Wonderful work! |
| PoertyQueen 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAww I want more Fylix and Alden can I have more please *pouts* |
| Mina 2007-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse=O Please finish this? I love it! You and your gay stories! You're so good at this, Marsha, I'm jealous. =[ |
| Khali Draegan 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was cute and random. Though, you spelled "tank" "tang." But, eh, it's not like it impaired my reading or caused me braindamage. Heh. Anyway, thank you for the review. I really appriciate it. I'm looking forward to more slash, or anything else, from you. And, while I can't right away--cough--I do plan on reading the rest of your work. Heh... Yeah, okay, bye. |
| through-the-motions 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAllo, it's me again. -squee!- It's fine that it's only a oneshot. In fact, I think adding onto it would ruin it. It ended perfectly, yup. ^^ Can't wait for your update on Sodomy, by the way. Oh, and I read your profile. I think I'll take you up on your offer to just send you an e-mail. Hope you don't mind. - Motion |
| it really is a REVOLUTION 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAww this was sweet. Sucks it's only a one-shot though. =D |
| Athnyha 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuselol. cute :) I imagine Fylix with a hint of a British accent, whatever gave me that idea I have no clue. cute story, please continue. Thanks ^_^ |
| another-happy-ending 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseoh! I like this! aww. I am sad it is a one-shot. -pout- It would be an awesome story. -nod- Yumminess. -carms |
| Prisoner-11 2006-08-24 ch 2, | abuseAww...I feel like I cheated on the other story somehow, when I read that Joey was in this one, I had to see if he was with Kyle... |
| neongoldtooth 2006-08-14 ch 2, | abuseAw. poor Alden...that last part "I think I need a hug." is so damn cute.\I'd hug him. lol.I cant wait to read more of this story. |
| elliegator 2006-07-30 ch 2, | abuseI actually haven't seen any ah... "gay" love stories on here yet until now so ahh... good for you!... Yup.-elliegator |
| Jin-ashi 2006-07-11 ch 2, | abuse*sigh* STUPID "ONLY ALLOWED TO REVIEW ONCE PER CHAPTER RULE" inso please update Sodomy! i really want to read the next chapter! i also love this story!... KYLE and JOEY! *SNICKERS* |
| RenegadeWarlord 2006-07-08 ch 2, | abuseI was sumwhat confused at the start.but it was a good peice of writing and made me laugh a couple times...mostly when you dissed Brittany..everyone hates that **. Boogley. |
| BreathingFlames 2006-07-07 ch 2, | abuseAw... *hugs* It's...it's...** perfect. Gak. *dies* I practically (okay, fine...not practically, loudly) squealed when I saw that you had updated. And I want another chapter soon but I love you so much that I'll be patient. *is patient* I adore everything...just...every word and sentece has a purpose, ya know? Like, I couldn't help but smile during the entire thing. Thank you so much! ~BF |
| magalina 2006-07-07 ch 2, | abuseKyle and Joey as in Kyle and Joey!! How did that happen? >o< Please update Sodomy soon!! This was a great chapter! Im sure there is a good explanation about the kiss thing...right? ^^ Update! |