   InnerBeauty 2006-07-02 . chapter 1Aww, this is a beautiful poem. I can relate! Great Job! |
 Peppa 2006-06-26 . chapter 1Beautiful poem.
"choke the breathe from my lungs."
my favourite line, although I think you mean 'breath' |
 JM 2006-06-26 . chapter 1 If only... |
 Butterfly Disguise 2006-06-26 . chapter 1Huh. At first I wasn't sure. But I really liked that one. Nice job, really. :)~BD~ |
 i call it laughable 2006-06-26 . chapter 1simple & to the point- makes it all the more. |
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