hey. excellent ending. the alps, huh? lol. loved the story it was brilliant. and i will be surely waiting and keeping on the look out for more of your writing.

read you around. :P

GA

lol. go marianne. my favourite line:

"Toys? I had no idea you were so kinky, marianne."

Haha. gotta love jamie. great chapter again. till tomorrow.

GA

oh. good chapter. poor nicky. he should come to the rescue :P but marianne must have some tricks up her sleeve - y'know, a couple bombs or whatever. like husband, like wife. lol. i hope anyways. cant wait for more as always.

GA

yep. i learnt that lesson while reading your story. get too distracted. lol. but the cerreal was still good, a little soggy but edible. good chapter by the way. exciting stuff.

till tomorrow!! :P

GA

hey. another good one. i had my bowl of cereal, planning to eat it while reading but i ended up pushing it aside while i read this. lol. it was great. cant wait for more. as always :P

GA

Hey. im so happy. two chapters in one day. lol. at least, i think i read the last today. eh...ive got no sense of time. Hmm...favourite character would be Nicholas. i dont know why. the way he just pulls out a couple of bombs and thinks nothing of it. lol. i like his style. after nicholas would be jamie. cheeky little bugger. haha. cant wait for more.

GA

hey. another great chapter. umm...dont know what to say. haha. cant wait for more. i always repeat myself in reviews :P

GA

hey. another good chapter. couldnt see anything wrong with it :P interesting about the cyborgs at evans place. and only his. cant wait for more.

GA

oh.. great chapter. i was trying to read it really fast to see what happens. haha. damn, no nimifel. oh well. cant wait for more!!

GA

ooh! i cant wait till the next chapter...i want to find out what will happen next!...thia story is very interesting, by the way...talk 2 u later

hey. another great chapter. i found nothing wrong with it. the dialogue and everything is perfect. i cant wait for the next chapter :P

GA

howdy. great chapter. i really liked it. the writing was perfect and the exchange between them at the end was interesting. i cant wait for more :P

GA

I loved your story it was written very well. I can't wait for you to post more.

Hey! So another story? Well, I hope it is as fantastic as your others. I looked at your sketches...they are great! So, I guess I should get to the story...I'll review later.

i cant be bothered sighing in. lol. good chapter. i love the fast updates. hm... u dont know what to think of preston. guess i';ll have to wait to see. cant wait for more.

laters

GA