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| BloodiedFangs 2008-04-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseamazing story, i've always loved vampire stories, but this is fab. i love it lol. can't wait to find out what happens next :D |
| Midnight Star666 2008-04-04 ch 5,  | abuseomg i love this story. its such a nail biter. could you please continue. |
| Sidekick59 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseInteresting story. It was very captivating, however I noticed you used a lot of ellipses. It seemed eve to be a bit like overkill. I realise that it fits the emotion of the story at the moment but they are other ways to express silence and breaks in speech. The story is over all very good though and I look forward to reading more. |
| Oi-You 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseThis story is a very good one. I hope you will update soon. |
| efphrim 2008-02-02 ch 5, | abusePlz tell me your going to have more. |
| DemonChipmunk 2008-01-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow! This is great! Please continue the story! |
| XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome, I love it. You're an amazing writer BTW. lol. Much Love |
| music-is-luv 2007-11-17 ch 2, | abuseYo! Dude, this is an AWESOME story! Like, seriously. It kills me. In a good way, though. XD Dude, PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVE PICS! I NED PICS! I NEED THEM TO LIVE! WITHOUT THEM I DIE! Do you REALLY want me to die? 'Cause that would be MURDER! > |
| erasmuss 2007-09-21 ch 5, | abuseIt is awful that this has not been continued -grives- Such a prettyfull story. |
| Sesshoumaru (Sesshy) 2007-09-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love your story. It was exciting and it was horrible and great. It would seem like you are giving the Vampires the privallege of being good? Weel I think it is the best thing I have ever read and I am waiting for more. Please and thank you. ^^ ~Sesshy |
| Drake Van 2007-07-20 ch 5, | abuseOMG! this was frigin' awesome!! i can't believe u haven't updated since 06! i really think u should keep writing this story; the plot, the characters, the suspense, the emotion!! brilliant!! it almost made me cry!! (which is saying somthing)ok, i'm just ranting now. plz update!! Drake Van |
| Ri 2007-07-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh what happens next? Hope you update some day! |
| KemicallyUnbalanced 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseI love how sweet Hector is. This is a really good story! I hope you update soon! |
| Sajex 2007-06-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseSo...what happens, come on and update already it's a great story, will Raphael's friends find out? What about him and Hector? Please hurry and update! It's a great story. |
| Wanabet 2007-05-25 ch 5, | abusePlease UPDATE SOON! One of the best vampire stories I have read in awhile! |