Great poem.

it sounds so hopeless throughout most of the poem, but at the end, there does sound like there is some hope, and that's what i like about it... good job. by the way, i'm almost done with my fanfiction of your story! :)

Very heartfelt. I can feel the emotion in the words.

aw...reminds me of the one-shots I finished typing and will put up... eventually. btw, magnet schools are like the highly gifted ones. u noe... for smart ppl? You take a test and if u get a certain score, u get rated normal, gifted, or highly gifted. I don't really noe THAT much about it, but i wrote about it because i was in a magnet school so i sorta noe... yeah.. i'm pretty sure it's only the smart people who go 2 the magnet part of the school. the rest is regular, and not called magnet

ugh, sucks how you can't choose who you fall for, huh? meaningful piece you have here.

I liked this a lot. It was simple, and you didn't try and over express anything. Nicely written!